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I know I'm really late in playing this and so much must have changed since the demo came out. But I love it! I can't wait for it to come out! This is so up my alley. The visuals are incredible and the plot is already upsetting and getting my brain to thinking. There's glitchiness that happens when you go straight into a second playthrough after finishing the demo, but I figure that's probably not very relevant anymore. But I did want to say that some sentences in the very beginning before you take control of Rourke are very long. Most of the rest of the demo reads fine, but since the beginning of the game will be what draws people in and provides important exposition, cutting up some of Rourke's monologue into shorter, more to-the-point sentences will make it easier for new players to absorb the information and it will read less awkwardly.